11. Haver

[gunwithoutmusic]

When you're finally done absolving yourself
Crane your neck for a better view
Find me in the liminal and let me know

Comments

[swirlsofpurple]

An intriguing interp of the prompt

I think we all know one of those people who go on and on while justifying/explaining themselves

[erulissedances]

An interesting interpretation of the prompt.

- Erulisse (one L)

[muchtooarrogant]

"Crane your neck for a better view," made me chuckle.

Dan

[bleodswean]

Haha! So much elegance in teeth-gritting exasperated finality.

[halfshellvenus]

Oh, that sounds like a troubled relationship! And "crane your neck" shows how clearly the narrator is not even really on the other person's mind as they justify all of their transgressions until nothing is ever really their fault.

[chasing_silver]

Very interesting!

[mollywheezy]

What an interesting use of the prompt!

[murielle]

Oh, how many times I wish I'd had this much eloquence. And courage.

Bravo!👏👏👏

[fausts_dream]

Self forgiveness is fine. It's when we insist the world and especially the wronged accept our verdict that we get in trouble.

Nice entry.

[rayaso]

I love the last line, particularly as it relates to absolving yourself. Very novel use of the prompt.

[alycewilson]

The air of finality in this, as if it's the last word in an argument, is both direct and effective.

[reidharriscooper]

Pass the coding of the horizontal
Magic is only an illusion cause you're not a warlock
pop a soda and watch along with me.