4. Uncanny Valley

[gunwithoutmusic]

it's in the penumbra
that i find you
the place where no one looks

the periphery holds
our dreams
our fears

our silence

we can exist here
descending into the fantastic
and closing our senses
and our minds
and
and
and

it will pass
the silence
with our dreams
with our fears

while we wait

Comments

[rayaso]

This is outstanding! I love the three "and" lines, as well as the general structure.