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static_abyss ([personal profile] static_abyss) wrote in [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic 2025-06-28 04:18 am (UTC)

The ending hit in exactly the right way. I love that you included those little verses in between the paragraphs. It gave the piece a very atmospheric air, which I think added nicely to the writing.

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