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Dan ([personal profile] muchtooarrogant) wrote in [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic 2024-09-15 02:30 am (UTC)

This took me on a bit of a journey. The first stanza made me smile for some reason, it felt almost whimsical. And then, of course, I read the rest, and whimsy changed to sadness and regret. Poetry doesn't always work for me, but I really like what you've done here.

Dan

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