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static_abyss ([personal profile] static_abyss) wrote in [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic 2024-08-13 12:12 am (UTC)

I enjoy reading your poetry, and this piece had a nice rhythm to it. Also, I agree with the other comments about the third stanza. It was also my favorite.

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