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halfshellvenus ([personal profile] halfshellvenus) wrote in [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic 2024-08-09 02:05 am (UTC)

You were so close
A carnival mirror
A copper pan

I liked these lines--almost there, but a little skewed somehow. Maybe when we rely solely on ourselves, we do not always feel complete. There's no external validation, no sense of really being "seen". Despite how hard we've worked and how much we might deserve it.

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