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bleodswean ([personal profile] bleodswean) wrote in [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic 2022-06-01 06:06 pm (UTC)

This is a really nice scene - it's clear in its visuals, and the dialogue gives enough exposition and current situation to not feel that we're being told too much. It also flows very well. I love that you've - maybe? - turned a new corner in this 'Verse and that we are now going to get to see adventure and positive experiences that are part of boldness, bravery, and the longing for better things!

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